Hey all! Here is my first and secondish pass of my thesis. Its comin to guys! I must admist the crit did go a little rougher than I thought but good news is that is has spark and is appealing to that faculty....they loved the the end at that point she gets the flower and on. The main critique was the points she gets poked and kicked. I am taking the kicking part out and probably making it to where she is dodging the bow more and she falls back. Well heres the link.